Thursday, December 6, 2007

Tutoring w/ Stephen Gregory week 5

Quick recap of the week 5 session w/ Stephen. We're going to call this one done for now and move on to another assignment. But before we do that Stephen had some notes on this piece. The pose the boy student gets into from about frames 140-155ish wasnt reading clearly. And the expression could be presented clearer if it wasnt in profile but more turned towards camera.
The perpetrator pose in question. Stephen's suggestion for a clearer read. His draw-overs on the frames. My fixes according to his critiques.Here are the results with Stephens feedback implemented.

Hm. I'll have to step away from this one & not look at it for a while before I could go in and polish again. So hopefully the mistakes and such will be more apparent. This was supposed to be a simpler, more physical, 200 frame-ish assignment, but somehow it grew into this beast! Its insane how much time I end up spending in the polish phase. I feel like my workflow could be improved in that area. And also acting. And moving holds. Mechanics. and everything else....

So heres to the next assignment! A dialogue shot! Only a few more weeks left of the tutorship!

8 comments:

Sarita Kolhatkar said...

Hey there! Wow this blog is truly wonderful! I love your style! Yes I currently am working at Arena as an Enivonment Artist. I agree the artwork here is really stellar - very intimidating! I'll be back soon!

Jason Newkirk said...

awesome man...Hey I was curious what model that is that you are using for your pieces. Is that a personal model and rig u are using or is it a free one out there on the innernetz. Just curious, I really like the look of it.

Bobby Pontillas said...

Thanks for stopping by Sarita! Have fun at ArenaNet!

Jason the rig is in Max and it was made by Peter Starostin.
If you're interested, it could be found here:
http://www.3dluvr.com/clisk3d/

Kristian said...

i love it. The point where he is sounding out the words to himself is a beautiful detail. You're drawings are also extremely good..you are an all round awesome artist

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