So I've been cruisin the campus alot recently, checkin out mentors critiques of students work, and by far the one thing that is brought up the most is simplification.
"You these 4 main poses, narrow them to two." "Stay in this pose and work in it." " You have too many ideas in the shot, narrow them down to two, so that you are just going from idea a to idea b." " That movement doesn't need to be there."
Something I'm completely guilty of .